Poem - The Dining

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By Drax

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The Marquess’s Marchioness ascended the stairs
the dining room perched in the high tower

I struggled from step to step
perfectly placed to admire her gastrocnemius

and semimembranosus and of course her biceps femoris

then my knowledge of musculature nomenclature deserted me

I was tempted to fall back on a somewhat chauvinist compliment
but the mood of the house was against it..

this particular night
then turning the last square corner
the dining room stole my imagination

a trick of perspective or reality
the long table stretched away like a serpent’s slither
a marble plinth with a motif of writhing waifs
thirteen black candelabra dripping blood wax on their skin

my mind was almost silenced

my heart ticking to the dripping

my life entwined with the waifs’ pain and pleasure

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..the latest poems from Drax..

gastrocnemius 1

gastrocnemius 2

semimembranosus and biceps femoris

semimembranosus and biceps femoris from another angle...

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gaboy911970 5 months ago

funny looking

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Pearldiver 5 months ago

Nice work mate.. even better if read with Hotel California played in the background for some reason. Voted up - thanks for sharing your talent Drax.. take care.

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Drax Hub Author 5 months ago

@gaboy... yes monkeys are funny before they press the big button... it is kind of surreal... ;-)

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Drax Hub Author 5 months ago

@Pearldiver... thanks very much, I surprised myself with this one since it came from just one image of a haunted house. I have asked for permission to use it and am still waiting...

Ciao

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CloudExplorer Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

This is an amazing poem Drax, your use of complex high caliper words is unique. Voted up as funny, interesting & Awesome.

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jhamann Level 6 Commenter 5 months ago

Awesome Drax, stop on by to check out my poems on bones. I currently work in the field of Anatomical Pathology and hold poems with such excellent topics close to my heart. Voted Up!

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blondey Level 3 Commenter 4 months ago

What's up drax? Hope to see more and more of your wonderful poetry!

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Drax Hub Author 3 months ago

Hey Blondey... maxed on computer work to keep the rent paid, hard to get the poetry to co-exist... I have this big pile of handwritten notes and ideas and must take a long weekend soon and make some poetry... Thanks a lot :-)

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