Poem - Dancing Leaves
62Dancing Leaves
dancing leaves in a grand waltz wind
little vortices of symmetry
sway my way
as I escape the mundane world
along an October path of yellows and browns
I am lost in the hypnotic swirl of colour
the green of the leaf sacrificed
to the march of autumn gold
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I am getting the too short message with this poem, jeez it's a short poem folks..
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Incoming Dancing Leaves Girls
...now would be good time to talk Official.. grin...
Drax
Beautiful picture and really nice!
thank you Olivia...
That was so buituful and i am writeing a poem to hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fall Leaves Fall Flowers away
Do you think you could help me with the rest? Please help cell phone 7123108073
Hey Tiffany thanks, I have very poor connectivity right now but when I'm back in civilisation I will...
Thanks again Drax
Love love love the last two lines. Very nice. I liked it. Sometimes short and simple can be so much more enjoyable.
thanks very much Eyes... I like short poems to try and capture events that are self contained and anyone reading it can just get it without having to spend half a day wondering what was it about... Drax...
Beautifully composed.
I, too, love to get lost 'in the hypnotic swirl of colour'
when the green of the leaf is sacrificed to the march of autumn gold.
Congrats!
Hi Broteem, thanks very much for the nice comment.. :-)
Hi Drax :)
love your poems, they really do talk to you.
well done, fan dabby dozey work ;)
Hi Vicki
thanks very much lovely of you to say... :-)
Great imagery and gun-toting women. What's not to like?
Green sacrificed for gold on a white altar cloth -sounds like a nice design for a flag to me. Cheers.
sligobay... that design did not work so well, better to have went with the Starry Plough..
Beautifully, vote up and keep it writing like this. You surely have it.
Hi lafamillia... thank you, it is kind of you to say so... and it is great to receive a positive comment such as this... :-)
Paul Edmondson Level 4 Commenter 5 years ago
Beautiful and Well said.